Wednesday, November 09, 2005

 

Ei ki hocchey

nondon etey porshudin, chotto pool er dharey
haat diley tumi kayda korey hothat amaar gharey
ami heshey bollam - ei ki hocchey, lok dekhchey

ektu porey haath ta tomar gelo buk er kachey
kayda korey check korley strapless bra achey
ami heshey bollam - ei ki hocchey, lok dekhchey

prothomey ghar, tarporey buk, tarporey te uru
dirty ekta "look" diye tumi khela korley shuru
ami heshey bollam - ei ki hocchey, lok dekhchey

tateo tomar mon bhorey na, komorey diley haat
thash korey ek amio dilam tomarey chopetaghat
chokkhu tomar chhanabora, lojja ey chokh laal
laal er saathey matching abaar, tomar fancy gaal
kado golaye, bolle amaye - ei ki hocchey, lok dekhchey

Comments:
e just kobita noi .e mahakabyo ...
 
Oshadharon, tulanaheen
 
haha, "chopetaghaat" ami ei shobdo ta khoob love kori.
 
chomotkar! and how very true!
 
this one is just brilliant!
 
AMAZING
"uru" HAHAHAHAHA~~~~~~~~~
 
akash:

dhonyobad chara ki bolbo jani na
aami abar formality o je mani na

thalassa:

na na eta to apnar kindness khaali
aaj dicchen praise kaal deben gaali

srin:

keno srin chopetaghat kheyecho naki
naki sei icchey ti tomar ekhoo baki

rimi:

sotyi sotyi. how very very true
amaar identity niye peyecho ki kono clue

teleute:

eki banglay likhley kortam rhyme
for now let me do just some mime

ui:

dekhchi tumi anondo peyecho shuney uru
bacchar ei halot dekhey kuchkocchi bhuru
 
issh...thaklam na dekhte
pelam na chopetaghat shunte......
 
Formality-ir dhar dhorona, apni-kopni keno
Prothom didi, ekhon apni, tumi ki amaay cheno?
 
heh... loooooved the last stazy. oi part-ta sotti-y mahakabyo-r nidorshon.

:D
 
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loker kaaj je sudhui dekha,
tatei tara khush,
ek choretei firlo dekhi
hotath tomar hnuss.
fostinosti korbe joto
porbe omon du char gnuto,
taoto hoini aarong dholai
moter opor benche gechho bhai.
 
'Cholona nandan kanone
kat pipre kamre dile morbo dujone'
Kat pipre'r hul royechhe
okhane haat deyoa bhul hoyechhhe
Rag korona mon amour
tumi ja sexy, dosh ki amar?
Cholo na jai lake er paarHe
khabo chumu jhop e jharHe|
 
ribh:

peley na tumi choeptaghat shuntey
parley chumur modhur awajo guntey

thalassa:

tomakey aami ki chini, tomakey aami ki jaani
trojan bondhu tomar sombondhey aami ki bishesh gyani?

mandy:

mohakabyo hok ba hok limerick
kobi guru holen always theek

chitrak:

ahaa ahaa ki diley mitro
chinta mishti, lekha bichitro

panchu:

panchu besi chumu khetey cheona
tai ondon kanoney tumi jeona
 
Aribaas!
E je chorra kore kore uttor dei!
 
sherlock giri kora chhere diyechhi ami. just janalam.
 
this one was brilliant.
 
Amazing! Especially in the way you've used the Ghazal format with a slight improvisation. And the Radif: 'ei ki hocchey, lok dekhchey' so succinctly captures the whole of our times. You're just brilliant! A Srijato in the Making?
 
eita likhe tumi amar ballopreme shurshuri diyechho. Thanks a bunch! kobidranath
 
oti boro kobi na pay shamalochak
oti boro gandu na pay dekhar chokh!
 
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